I have learned a lot about myself and my
writing throughout my junior year. I think that I have actually improved more
this year in writing than any other year in the past. AP Language and
Composition was definitely a challenging class but it was a challenge that I
felt I needed in order to start getting a sense of a college level course. Throughout
this year, I was able to develop new, valuable skills and capabilities that I
will use further into my academic future.
I was also able to identify my strengths and weaknesses as a writer;
pinpointing my weaknesses by improving them throughout the year. With the several
amounts of thought-provoking pieces of literature such as In Cold Blood by Truman Capote and The Scarlet Letter by Nathaniel Hawthorne, I was able to
immerse myself into captivating pieces of literary work. By engaging myself
into these novels, I was able to increase my reading comprehension and had the
opportunity to learn the new ways of writing adopted by each author. As a
student, I believe that I have developed even more since English 10H. My
progress in this course has made me create this confidence I now have to continue
into my academic studies.
Throughout the year in AP Language, I
have learned so much. I remember being taught the different types of logical
fallacies and how they are used in an argument to support the writer’s view of
a certain topic. Analyzing arguments was
another significant lesson I learned. I can also remember that there are three
different approaches when it comes to making an argument effective; those
approaches include the Classical approach, the Rogerian approach, and the
Toulmin approach. All of which helped the class when it came to organizing our
own argument. With this, we were able to construct our argument research paper.
By creating my argument research paper, I was able to incorporate everything I
knew about an effective argument and include it within my argument research
paper.
Over the course of the year, I saw a growth in my writing when it came to assignments such as the Incentive essay and the Technology Information argument. With the Incentive essay, I saw where I needed improvement. Thanks to Ms. Fogarty’s helpful comments, I saw why I got a five. As I reviewed her comments, I learned that my thesis was not as strong as it should have been and that my introduction need more evidence. In my Technology Information argument, I realized that I had grown since the Incentive essay. The grade point was higher considering that I had made an effective argument and had synthesized the sources efficiently. The argument practice I did previously was probably the main facilitator that helped me achieved that higher grade. Overall, I was satisfied that I had increased my grade and had received great feedback from Ms. Fogarty.
Over the course of the year, I saw a growth in my writing when it came to assignments such as the Incentive essay and the Technology Information argument. With the Incentive essay, I saw where I needed improvement. Thanks to Ms. Fogarty’s helpful comments, I saw why I got a five. As I reviewed her comments, I learned that my thesis was not as strong as it should have been and that my introduction need more evidence. In my Technology Information argument, I realized that I had grown since the Incentive essay. The grade point was higher considering that I had made an effective argument and had synthesized the sources efficiently. The argument practice I did previously was probably the main facilitator that helped me achieved that higher grade. Overall, I was satisfied that I had increased my grade and had received great feedback from Ms. Fogarty.
For my junior year, I was grateful for
having a resourceful and informative teacher. From my perspective, I believed
that Ms. Fogarty did a remarkable job in instructing the class. She was very
patient with the class and instructed the class efficiently. I appreciate a
teacher like that; makes me, as a student, more comfortable on doing my
assignments. I also appreciate that she gave us worthy criticism on our work.
It helped me a lot on improving all my assignments. Overall, Ms. Fogarty was a
great teacher. Her instruction, constructive criticism, and her overall
enthusiasm made her an ideal English teacher.
I can honestly say that I am much better
and more comfortable with writing than I was last year. I am not saying this
because I have to; I actually appreciate all the things Ms. Fogarty has taught
me this year because I am so much more comfortable with my writing skills than
I have ever been before. One piece of advice I would give to a student who is
struggling with this AP class is that he or she must find the source of his or
her struggle. If the problem is within the classroom, the student should seek
help from the teacher and clear the issue so that that student gets back on
track. If it’s outside the classroom, the student should relieve the issue as
soon as possible, that way the student has a clear road to perform efficiently.
Every student taking an AP course must know that dedication is key. Students
considering on taking an AP course must know that he or she must commit their
time to homework and pay much attention to the teacher. Once the student is
informed, he or she will then decide whether or not an AP course is the right
thing to do. If taking an AP is the right thing to do, then he or she will then have to get ready... to Rumble!
Luis, I'm glad to see that you have learned a lot from AP Language this year, I think many of us can agree that we have seen improvements in our writing compared to last year. I also agree that Ms. Fogarty's comments have been a lot of help throughout the year, and I also have gained confidence from this class as well.
ReplyDeleteI completely agree with your advice for future students, I think that it is usually easy to find the issue a person may face in AP Language, and like I stated before, Ms Fogarty's comments can improve upon any errors that the student has made. It definitely goes without saying that any AP course is going to require a lot of focus, otherwise it will be hard to keep up with the material throughout the year. Also, it is obvious that it is a class that must be taken seriously, much like you have stated in the reflection. I think that your closing sentence definitely is a great way to sum up the entire reflection, once a person knows what they are getting into, then they know what exactly what kind of work they will have to put in for next year.
Hello there Luis,
ReplyDeleteAfter reading your reflection I can clearly see that you learned a lot from AP English. I enjoyed the brief refreshment of techniques that we learned in the beginning of the school year as well as from the books we read throughout the year. I applaud you for remembering so much because I honestly forgot about the Rogerian and Poulmin writing techniques. It reminded me that Ms. Fogarty taught us so many techniques and approaches that we may be forced to write in college and which style we may find comfortable in using for individual needs. As to the instruction we have received I completely agree with you. Instruction is key in learning and Ms. Fogarty was a great instructor which played an important role in our academic development. Her criticism was indeed helpful and provided a lot of insight when it came time to make improvements in our writing. I also agree with your recommendation towards future risk takers ready to RUMBLE with AP English. Dedication is one of the key components to becoming. the future risk takers of this class you need to be dedicated to their education in order to be successful